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The wind speaks,
Whispering thoughts of corruption,
Of what is yet to come.
A mere whisper,
A slight warning,
That few will ever hear.
Then its too late,
The storm erupts,
A curtain of all corrupt.
The warning disregarded,
Not one realizes,
Nor acknowledges its existance.
Once again it strikes,
Its venom unnoticed,
Destroying the world.
Another peice of humanity lost,
Drawn into the puzzle of life,
Proving ignorance truly costs.
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This is a random poem I came up with...Comments are welcome!!!!!...Tell me watcha think!:D
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~Sunreaver:iconSunreaver: Feb 14, 2008, 5:33:07 PM
Fantastic work, loved every bit of it ^^
:+fav:, for sure

:hug:

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"Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is."

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*forbiddendragonfly:iconforbiddendragonfly: Feb 14, 2008, 5:43:09 PM
thanx!:D...i'm glad you liked it!

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:heart:Burning into my mind, flowing through my veins, emotions of every kind are driving me insane…:heart:
~Sunreaver:iconSunreaver: Feb 14, 2008, 5:52:54 PM
Oh, no problem at all ^^

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"Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is."

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*forbiddendragonfly:iconforbiddendragonfly: Feb 15, 2008, 3:12:56 PM
thanx again!:D

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:heart:Burning into my mind, flowing through my veins, emotions of every kind are driving me insane…:heart:
~Sunreaver:iconSunreaver: Feb 15, 2008, 3:54:53 PM
No problem, still ^^

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"Man is the only creature that refuses to be what he is."

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~chaosangel0:iconchaosangel0: Mar 5, 2008, 9:00:53 AM
Wow! That's awesome! Really great poem!

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"We'll help you perform this miracle
But you must set your past free
You dug this hole, but you can't bury your soul Open your mind and you will see"
-"The Glass Prison" by Dream Theather
*forbiddendragonfly:iconforbiddendragonfly: Mar 5, 2008, 4:04:30 PM
Thanx!:D

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:heart:Burning into my mind, flowing through my veins, emotions of every kind are driving me insane…:heart:
~chaosangel0:iconchaosangel0: Mar 6, 2008, 1:02:15 PM
You're welcome!

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"We'll help you perform this miracle
But you must set your past free
You dug this hole, but you can't bury your soul Open your mind and you will see"
-"The Glass Prison" by Dream Theather
*forbiddendragonfly:iconforbiddendragonfly: Mar 6, 2008, 3:24:54 PM
:D

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:heart:Burning into my mind, flowing through my veins, emotions of every kind are driving me insane…:heart: